Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my story.

Lost in the Krill

In the afternoon there were three whales. One was little and two were big. The baby, dad and mum whales were looking for some krill to eat. That is when he got lost in the krill.

I find it hard to think about some things at writing. I tried my best to think about when the story happened and tell Mrs Mason more about what happened in my story.